Helga's Pet?
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Re: Helga's Pet?
I really like that scene as well! <3 It will be so cute and funny! x3
Also, at the beginning, can we add in something like Helga's being pressured to get rid of Bites by her family? Bites does stuff like eating Olga's socks/stuffed animals (much to Helga's amusement), scaring Miriam and making her claim "I need to stop drinking smoothies...I keep seeing this giant lizard around the house!", and Bob just says, "That thing really smells! Hoo-WEE!" XD Of course, Helga refuses to get rid of him, but when he "runs away," maybe she thinks he's doing it to make it easier on her with her family?
Also, at the beginning, can we add in something like Helga's being pressured to get rid of Bites by her family? Bites does stuff like eating Olga's socks/stuffed animals (much to Helga's amusement), scaring Miriam and making her claim "I need to stop drinking smoothies...I keep seeing this giant lizard around the house!", and Bob just says, "That thing really smells! Hoo-WEE!" XD Of course, Helga refuses to get rid of him, but when he "runs away," maybe she thinks he's doing it to make it easier on her with her family?
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Aw, that's sad!
I think it should just show the scenes of the Pataki family, rather than them pressuring her to get rip of it, just to make the episode simplier, unless it doesn't complicate the plot the much.
I think it should just show the scenes of the Pataki family, rather than them pressuring her to get rip of it, just to make the episode simplier, unless it doesn't complicate the plot the much.
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Well, I mean, it would give it a little more substance instead of going with the whole "pet is lost-- must find it" plot. Plus, I think it's good if we show the other Patakis' reactions to Bites. At the end, when Helga finds him, she discovers he's just been playing with Abner/looking for food/etc. And the other Patakis see how much Bites means to her and lets her keep him...as long as he JUST stays in her room. XDXD
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Okay, that sounds better (nothing else nods)
What if when Arnold and Helga finally give up, and right before they find Bites, she tells him what's going on with between the family and Bites.
What if there's a scene where Helga's sort of depressed:
Bob: *mad for whatever reason* Olga! Get your keester down here!
Helga: . . .*she comes down quietly*
Bob: * o_O *
Helga: . . . *sad face*
Bob: . . . *looks at Helga*
Helga: . . .
Bob: . . .
Then some interaction or something?
Ha ha I can think!
What if when Arnold and Helga finally give up, and right before they find Bites, she tells him what's going on with between the family and Bites.
What if there's a scene where Helga's sort of depressed:
Bob: *mad for whatever reason* Olga! Get your keester down here!
Helga: . . .*she comes down quietly*
Bob: * o_O *
Helga: . . . *sad face*
Bob: . . . *looks at Helga*
Helga: . . .
Bob: . . .
Then some interaction or something?
Ha ha I can think!
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I thinkkk that if there's any sign of Bob or Miriam not approving of Bites, it should be when Helga and Arnold are looking for her. Maybe Bob could ask what she's doing, and when she responds, he can say something, like, "About time! That thing was starting to smell!" or something like that xD
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XD
I think that's for the best XD
I think that's for the best XD
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How should Miriam react, though? Should she just nod in agreement and then go to sleep? xD
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Miriam: Uh huh *nods*
*CRASH!*
*miriam asleep on the table*
What, you mean how she'll react to Bites or Helga's sadness?
*CRASH!*
*miriam asleep on the table*
What, you mean how she'll react to Bites or Helga's sadness?
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I mean how will she react to Bites missing? I think that your little scene answers the question perfectly, though xD
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Just like to say I love the name "Bites" and Bob should disapprove but Miriam, being the way she is, should be indifferent about Bites and unaware of his existence.
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Maybe,(like someone said before), Miriam could know it's there subconsenncsly (I cant spell) and she should think she's halusinating (still cant spell XD)
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There's a spell-check on the forums, peachcake xD
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Mehhhh, I like the idea of everyone disapproving of Bites in the Pataki household BEFORE he goes missing. Then when Bites "runs away" Helga thinks it's because Bites heard her family talking about him. =( XD Plus I kind of like my Pataki reactions from my post earlier... <_<; Bob says he smells, Miriam keeps thinking he's a hallucination [I'm the "someone" who suggested that before, by the way ], and Bites keeps eating Olga's stuff. XD They don't necessarily pressure her to get rid of him, but they complain about him a lot.
Of course, when Bites goes missing, she'll be really depressed, and then Bob can say, "Thank goodness! I don't know how much longer I could have taken that smell!" And then Miriam and Olga can kind of glare at him for saying something like that when Helga's so sad. XD And Bob's like, "...What? It's true!" And Helga just sighs and says, "I'm going to look for him," quietly closing the door behind her. The other Patakis exchange a somewhat worried glance. This scene could take place with Arnold as witness, if we thought that would be a good idea.
At the end, everyone can be a little more accepting of Bites. <3 And Helga promises to keep him in her room. XD
Of course, when Bites goes missing, she'll be really depressed, and then Bob can say, "Thank goodness! I don't know how much longer I could have taken that smell!" And then Miriam and Olga can kind of glare at him for saying something like that when Helga's so sad. XD And Bob's like, "...What? It's true!" And Helga just sighs and says, "I'm going to look for him," quietly closing the door behind her. The other Patakis exchange a somewhat worried glance. This scene could take place with Arnold as witness, if we thought that would be a good idea.
At the end, everyone can be a little more accepting of Bites. <3 And Helga promises to keep him in her room. XD
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Hey, so sorry to double-post, but just in case you didn't notice, leili, I sent a reply to your PM. XD It should show up at the top with "You have _ new messages" XD You probably already noticed, but just wanted to make sure! ^_^
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Okay, now I get it.
So any other to add, 'cause frankly i'm pooped XD
So any other to add, 'cause frankly i'm pooped XD
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Don't worry; leili and I are in the process of writing the script! You might be seeing some of it fairly soon! ^ ^ No promises on that though; it might take a while XD
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Don't rush! Take your time!
As far as I know, writing takes time!
As far as I know, writing takes time!
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Status report: We've got 20 pages written so far! :O
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Great!
That sounds very good!
How many pages are rhere gonna be in total, or are you just winging it until it ends?
That sounds very good!
How many pages are rhere gonna be in total, or are you just winging it until it ends?
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I think we're just kinda winging it XD... But it shouldn't be more than 35 or so.
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That's fine! I just wanted to know!
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No problem! I'll be working on more of the script tomorrow; things have been really hectic today. XD Plus I was working on the outline for Hey Helga! XD But the end is definitely in sight (that sounded unintentionally apocalyptic. XD). We know which scenes we need to write, so it should be fairly easy finishing things up.
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Meganium wrote: But the end is definitely in sight (that sounded unintentionally apocalyptic. XD). .
lol Tell Sid that XD
BTW nice to know it's going great, like I said before (like a thousand times but it probably wouldn't matter 'cause i'll say it again! XD) don't rush!
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Helga4ever, am I still one of the leaders for this?
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