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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:52 pm

I think you are right about going to the roots Smile
But I also think to show Nadine searching for her camera would be hilarious. So it'd be perfect to cut scenes with Nadine's investigation to minimum and show RhondaxRobert as the core?
I imagined part of Nadine like:
1 scene: Nadine shoots a bus.
2 scene: Nadine uknowledges she's lost the camera in bus.
3 scene: Nadine gets the camera from bus.
So it'd be a surprise for Rhonda and to readers to know that all plan is failed.
Rhonda doesn't have a tape to send.

Another alternative idea I had maybe Rhonda thinks of herself only the first time but then talking with Robert she understands she uses him, apologizes but in the end she is displeased that she failed and have nothing to send.


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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by shameonpretzel on Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:54 pm

Retromanka wrote:I think you are right about going to the roots Smile
But I also think to show Nadine searching for her camera would be hilarious. So maybe it'd be perfect to cut scenes with Nadine's investigation to minimum and show RhondaxRobert as the core.

You mean, like keep Nadine's role as a sub-plot?

That would work.
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:56 pm

I guess XD

So Rhonda tries making Robert cool but at the same time she tries to enter a video into a fashion show?
And Naideen chases the camera?

XD

IS that it or am I missing stuff?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:01 pm

yay!
So now what?
It's all wrapped up?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:02 pm

shameonpretzel wrote:
You mean, like keep Nadine's role as a sub-plot?

That would work.
Smile

Thanks Very Happy

peachcake21 wrote:I guess XD

So Rhonda tries making Robert cool but at the same time she tries to enter a video into a fashion show?
And Naideen chases the camera?

XD

IS that it or am I missing stuff?

Yep. No missings.
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:04 pm

wow! I thought you posted the "Yep.No missings." message before Retromanka!

lol that's why the post before said
"yay
So now what?
It's all wrapped up?"

Anywho, okay.

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:05 pm

Ahah...you send messages fastly xDD
Mmm...I think the idea's complete. So it's time for filling voids...and thinking of a tiny details. And yeah...writing the plot.

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:13 pm

XD No seresously I I think your post was posted before XD ah! Forget it! XD

Well Helga says something which Rhonda takes as a challenge to make Robert cool.
She asks Robert on a date (which is really a chance to prove Helga wrong and to enter in a tape in a fashion show) (BTW, doeas she really ask Robert out , I remembered someone suggested that so I added it)
Later Naideen is taping Robert and Rhonda but she loses the camer and goes after it.
Rhonda the whole time is talking to an invisible audiance.
something at the end


well ya go ahead and fill up any voids. . .

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by leilistories on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:40 pm

Wooh! <3

I'm happy when people like my ideas xD

I personally think that she really should ask Robert out... well, pretend to at least xD

And it's also a good idea to have Rhonda apologize to Robert.
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:40 pm

Okay...for today I'm not full of ideas...but...as I'm right the voids are:
1) What's going to be on the camera....? (like the shots with Gertie-tarzan...bus driver, Curly....and etc...)
2) How the comic would start?
3) How Rhonda would choose Robert? How Rhonda would ask him for the meeting?
4) mini-scenes with school....Rhonda with Robert
5) in what shops Rhonda would take Robert?

Added: oops! sorry...I'm late with the massage. Yeah...I think Rhonda would go to talk with Robert in the corridor. And 'cause Robert is a quite kid she'd then after some monologue of her hug him by the shoulder with words "Okay...let's go shopping!". And Robert nods with the eyes "Shocked"


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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:46 pm

1. Gertie-tarzan, bus driver, (possibly Bites) Curly
2.Maybe it starts off with Rhonda wathcing a show that turns lame people to cool people (which is the one she enters)
3.Maybe he's the first one Rhonda spots
4. I guess?
5. I don't know. OHHH! Maybe that place where Arnold and Gerald went to get clothes in "Downtown as Fruits"

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Post by leilistories on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:49 pm

1. I thought that Nadine would eventually get the camera back xD I think that at the end of the show it should have the video in the TV show. It would show Gertie and Curly and all the other things to show the audience what really did happen with the camera.
2. Rhonda maybe bragging about the "What Not To Wear" show? xD
3. Maybe Rhonda could just spot him and say, "Perfect!"
4. Sorry... could you explain that a bit more? I don't understand
5. ...Fancy ones? xD I don't really know

*sigh* Peachcake, why must you beat me to answering the questions? xD


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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:51 pm

haha! what Retromanka, could you explain that last one you edited?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:52 pm

Ahahah))
2. I love this idea...but maybe it'd be just her best show. She remembers it and starts to imitate it?
3. I also love it.
5. I need to rewatch but I also think it could be. Maybe we also could make a parody on the Prada or Gucci shops with a high mirrows and the atmosphere of luxury?
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:53 pm

okay but could you explain that part where she hugs him and he agrees to go with her shopping?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:55 pm

peachcake21 wrote:haha! what Retromanka, could you explain that last one you edited?

It was the answer for the post of leili's about how Rhonda make Robert to go with her.
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Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:58 pm

oh okay thanks!

What next?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:00 pm

leilistories wrote:1. I thought that Nadine would eventually get the camera back xD I think that at the end of the show it should have the video in the TV show. It would show Gertie and Curly and all the other things to show the audience what really did happen with the camera.
2. Rhonda maybe bragging about the "What Not To Wear" show? xD
3. Maybe Rhonda could just spot him and say, "Perfect!"
4. Sorry... could you explain that a bit more? I don't understand
5. ...Fancy ones? xD I don't really know

*sigh* Peachcake, why must you beat me to answering the questions? xD

1. Ahahahah!!! I love it <3 It's better than mine.
2.mmm...I think so too.

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Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:02 pm

I dunno leili, I just do XD

so is it set?

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:04 pm

I personally outta of ideas for now...
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:06 pm

I think it's time for writing the plot...while writing it, it could be posted, discussed additionally
...soooo...who's gonna do that?
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:07 pm

I will do a quick sammary. . .

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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:12 pm

After taking what Helg says as a challenge, Rhonda decides to enter in a contest for "What not to wear". For her guest she uses Robert, Robert thinks he's on a dat (or something). Naideen is suppost to be filming them but ends up losing the camera. Meanwhile, Rhonda starts to feel like she uses Robert, and Rhonda apologizes.

BTW, did I miss anything?

also, does she realize herself?

I have one idea to add but it's really cheesy! Smile

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Post by leilistories on Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:15 pm

Add your idea, cause I've got none xD
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Re: Robert and Rhonda

Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:19 pm

She realizes what a great guy he is and decides it's not fair to use him >Razz

XD

does anyone like it XD

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