The Biggest Prank
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Re: The Biggest Prank
so it's like pink?
XD
Or maybe Helga made fun of Rhonda and her pants so Rhonda winds up thinking Hega did it on purpose XD
XD
Or maybe Helga made fun of Rhonda and her pants so Rhonda winds up thinking Hega did it on purpose XD
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Well, maybe something like this...?
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Everybody's standing around, laughing at Rhonda's misfortune. Rhonda is running around, trying to pull off the chair. Helga is off-screen during her line.
Rhonda: Ugh! Gross!
Helga: Hah! [insert something here], Princess!
Rhonda stops in her tracks at the statement. Rhonda looks over and sees that it's Helga. Her knuckles clench tightly together and she growls
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Everybody's standing around, laughing at Rhonda's misfortune. Rhonda is running around, trying to pull off the chair. Helga is off-screen during her line.
Rhonda: Ugh! Gross!
Helga: Hah! [insert something here], Princess!
Rhonda stops in her tracks at the statement. Rhonda looks over and sees that it's Helga. Her knuckles clench tightly together and she growls
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Re: The Biggest Prank
ooooooh! Nice!
after that, all the prank stuff happen?
after that, all the prank stuff happen?
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"Well, don't you look CHAIRful today, Princess." XD. BAAAAAD. Usually I come up with better corny puns, but oh well.
Anyway, that sounds great, leili!
Anyway, that sounds great, leili!
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XD
It made me giggle XD
"You seem to be in a sticky situation"
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It made me giggle XD
"You seem to be in a sticky situation"
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I love cheesy puns <3 xD
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great!
What next?
What next?
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Well, this idea's pretty well developed, and I even wrote an outline for it on page 6, so I guess the only thing left to do is to recruit workers and start writing! As usual, I volunteer to be a scriptwriter XD Anybody feel like posting the Ad?
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. . .
Well great! It's done!
. . .
Well great! It's done!
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Woooh! *waves Hey, Arnold! flag*
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I didn't know there was one! Where did you get it? Ebay?
JK!
JK!
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Hehe xD
So anyway, if this ends up being an episode... I call scriptwriter! :3
So anyway, if this ends up being an episode... I call scriptwriter! :3
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go ahead! You're the one who made up this idea!
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Awesome!
I'm gonna go ahead and make a want ad.
I'm gonna go ahead and make a want ad.
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wooo hooo!
Hey can I just be around to help, I won't do much (because school >) but could I just help out in little things?
Hey can I just be around to help, I won't do much (because school >) but could I just help out in little things?
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yay!
*feels fuzzy!*
*feels fuzzy!*
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So, if anybody's interested in hearing about my progress on this episode, I just got back early from Delaware because school starts on Wednesday for me @_@ I haven't really started the script yet, mostly because I was waiting for somebody to volunteer to be editor. But, since the rest of this week is going to be kind of laid back considering I have off Thursday for Rosh Hashanah, I'll try to finish it, or at least start it.
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LeeRain, hahaha! what?
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Editor, reporting for duty!
I can't be on too awfully often, but I would really like to be editor for this episode, because I came up with some good ideas for it earlier in the thread. :3
EDIT: Oh yeah! I forgot I made a really awesome Outline on page 6 of this thread. Leili, that should help you out!
I can't be on too awfully often, but I would really like to be editor for this episode, because I came up with some good ideas for it earlier in the thread. :3
EDIT: Oh yeah! I forgot I made a really awesome Outline on page 6 of this thread. Leili, that should help you out!
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Wooh! Thank you I'll try getting started today if I finish my homework early...I feel bad for not having any progress yet, anyway xD
And yes, I was planning on using that outline
And yes, I was planning on using that outline
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Oki doki... Problem!
So I got like... two pages done so far, and I honestly think what I have is really, really crappy xD
For the excuses: I've been finding my life pretty busy... I guess I could have more work than I do now, but I'm still busy. ^^; So it just kinda makes me less motivated than I usually would.
So, can somebody else take over the job for this? I feel really bad for not doing much on it
So I got like... two pages done so far, and I honestly think what I have is really, really crappy xD
For the excuses: I've been finding my life pretty busy... I guess I could have more work than I do now, but I'm still busy. ^^; So it just kinda makes me less motivated than I usually would.
So, can somebody else take over the job for this? I feel really bad for not doing much on it
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Just read this thread in ten minutes, and I think you guys have an amazing story here.
The only thing I want to comment on is the part where Phoebe is 'preaching' to the class, to get them to apologize.
I think it would make more sense for the teacher to have left in a hurry for something, possibly an announcement over the intercom, and Rhonda starts talking about what had happened.
With the noise of laughing children flooding the room, Phoebe would stand up and tell them that it's not funny. But being the quiet person she is, no one would really pay attention to her. THAT should be where Lila steps in. That class loves Lila, and if she went up and stood next to Phoebe, and they both expressed opinion, it could allow for Arnold to step up, as well. And the class would be more apt to actually listen.
Of course, this is just what had popped up in my head while I read this thread, so it's merely a thought to be considered. ^^
Oh, and have fun on these stories! When I get back from boot camp in February, I'm hoping to sign up as a volunteer editor! I love fixing grammar and spelling errors. ^^
Bye!
The only thing I want to comment on is the part where Phoebe is 'preaching' to the class, to get them to apologize.
I think it would make more sense for the teacher to have left in a hurry for something, possibly an announcement over the intercom, and Rhonda starts talking about what had happened.
With the noise of laughing children flooding the room, Phoebe would stand up and tell them that it's not funny. But being the quiet person she is, no one would really pay attention to her. THAT should be where Lila steps in. That class loves Lila, and if she went up and stood next to Phoebe, and they both expressed opinion, it could allow for Arnold to step up, as well. And the class would be more apt to actually listen.
Of course, this is just what had popped up in my head while I read this thread, so it's merely a thought to be considered. ^^
Oh, and have fun on these stories! When I get back from boot camp in February, I'm hoping to sign up as a volunteer editor! I love fixing grammar and spelling errors. ^^
Bye!
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I like that idea
I'll just add you as editor for now. You don't have to do anything until you get back
I'll just add you as editor for now. You don't have to do anything until you get back
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