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Re: Arnold's love life

Post by Retromanka on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:29 am

Okay Very Happy
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Post by Retromanka on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:36 pm

So that's the next part of script Smile
Helga goes outside the school. She looks bankrupt. Shown Phoebe and Helga together standing.
[Helga]: it's terrible...
[Phoebe]: what's terrible?
They start walking along the street.
[Helga]: ice-cream has been eaten. Remember?
[Phoebe]: it's not terrible. You can buy another.
[Helga]: Lila has eaten it!
[Phoebe]: Anyway you can buy another.
[Helga]: Phoebe! Arnold likes Lila. Understand?
[Phoebe]: eh...oh...yeah...but do you think it's true?
[Helga]: *drop down her brow* I saw them while I was in school now. They were twaddling and Lila smiled at him then.
[Phoebe]: Did you see Arnold's expression on that?
[Helga]: Can't remember...but wait! He was confused. But anyhow it doesn't make any sence...Oh...*frustrated*
[Phoebe]: but if he was puzzled by Lila's smile, if he didn't go and continue a talk and if he doesn't hang out with her after school as he did, Arnold doesn't like Lila so much now.
[Helga]: but if he was so confused and shy to go after her?
[Phoebe]: I don't think so. *quetly*
[Helga]: Why?!
[Phoebe]: I don't think Arnold's a coward. *blushes of Helga's gazing* He doesn't find difficulties talking with girls.
[Helga]: when you could make it?
[Phoebe]: sorry but make what?
[Helga]: Are you a spy?
[Phoebe]: it's a simple psychology studie.
[Helga]: Okay...but nonetheless I'm not sure enough.
Helga goes a step ahead Phoebe. Next panel shows only Phoebe.
[Phoebe]: *saying gently*...and logic.

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Post by Meganium on Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:03 pm

Um, I'm a little confused. Why did Lila eat Helga's ice cream?... Or am I misunderstanding? XD *feels stupid* Also, I'm not quite sure I understand Phoebe's last line ^ ^;;
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Post by Retromanka on Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:19 pm

Well...that's what I expected...
It's was in the old episode "Love Position". Helga didn't want to tell Phoebe straight she has a problem with Arnold and named it an ice-cream.

[Helga]: Are you a spy?
[Phoebe]: it's a simple psychology studie
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[Phoebe]: *saying gently*...and logic.
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Post by peachcake21 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:00 am

Poor Helga, she never got a taste of that flavor! XD
I'm so bad! XD

I get it!
It's "Helga's love potion" , just to point it out.

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Post by Meganium on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:30 am

LOL! I feel so stupid! XDXD Thanks for clearing that up! "Lila gets the ice cream all to herself!" XDXD Oh, that's lovely. <3

And oh; I get the logic line too now! XD Sorry; I'm a little slow on the uptake sometimes. ^ ^;
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Post by peachcake21 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:03 am

HAHA! Now i'm cluless!
What does ". . . and logic" mean?

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Post by Retromanka on Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:58 pm

Yeah...lol If it's hard to point out it can be replaced by another joke. Should it be edited...what do you think?
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Post by peachcake21 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:18 pm

Other people will eventually catch on but if you want it can be changed.
So . . .

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Post by Retromanka on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:20 pm

I think I'll go further and then if it'd be needed I'd think over Smile
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Post by peachcake21 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:46 pm

Okie-Dokie!

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Post by Meganium on Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:16 pm

I'm pretty sure I got it, but that's what Editors are for! Some of the jokes might have been lost in this silly and confusing void that is the English Language. XD So... if something doesn't make sense to us, we'll let you know, and then we can work out something that makes sense to all of us. Very Happy
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Post by Retromanka on Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:31 pm

I think you made right characteristic of a problem =В
I just have some problem with slang words 'cause I don't know them too many now but I hope after your edition work this void would be filled Very Happy
Thank you for support ^^
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Post by Meganium on Tue Jul 20, 2010 7:16 pm

No problem! It's all part of being a team! ^_^
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Post by peachcake21 on Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:19 am

I wonder if the discussion should be moved, you know so that everything stays in order.
I mean to move it to keep the important story ideas

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Post by Retromanka on Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:52 pm

You mean to make a summary?
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Post by peachcake21 on Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:27 pm

yep!

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Post by Meganium on Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:20 pm

Okay, tell me if I'm leaving anything out...

Arnold isn't hanging around Lila as much anymore, but they still get along. Helga becomes curious and enlists Phoebe's help to investigate what's going on with Arnold's love life. Phoebe finds an excuse to wear a detective outfit, and does as Helga wants her to, and maybe gets some false information, leading to hilarious results. XD At the end, Helga might find out that Arnold no longer likes Lila, and Phoebe may decide that being a detective is better left to Mr. Holmes. XDXD
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Post by mannardme on Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:55 pm

I like the sound of that. That sounds good! Very Happy
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Post by Meganium on Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:23 pm

Thank you! ^ ^
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Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:47 am

It sounds wonderful!
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Post by Meganium on Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:51 am

Great! Very Happy Then we should start elaborating! What sorts of things does Phoebe discover? They can be true OR false--false would actually lead to funnier results. Or stuff that doesn't matter at all. XD

[Phoebe is following Arnold around at once]
Gerald: Didn't you get the hamburger today, Arnold?
Arnold: Nah; I'm allergic to mustard.
Phoebe: [pops out from behind a trash can and scribbles in notepad] Arnold...allergic...to mustard.

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Post by peachcake21 on Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:01 am

XD
10:15 A.m

Report
Today is the first day on the job. The boss (I wanted to add a nickname XD)
has a special assingment for me, I must find out what , nicknamed, Miss Perfects up to with Blue Cap.
So far there's no sign of Miss Perfect.
But Blue Cap is acting suspiciouse.

So far, there's no important info for the Boss.
The only thing is that Blue cap has is an allergy to mustard. But the day is still young.

Urban Holmes out!
,Pheobe Hyerdahl

just something I came up with, like if she kept a hournal XD

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Post by Meganium on Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:03 am

Maybe Arnold's codename should be Ice Cream and Lila's should be an unappealing food. XDXD

Detective Heyerdahl sounds okay too instead of signing out with Urban Holmes Very Happy
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Post by Retromanka on Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:30 pm

Mmm...touching the end...
And after a hard investigation Phoebe makes an utterly obvious mistake so a small step for Helga is left to lift the veil of a mystery, yeah?

Meganium wrote:Maybe Arnold's codename should be Ice Cream and Lila's should be an unappealing food. XDXD

Maybe Lila's codename would sound like customer? Smile
I like the variant "Detective Heyerdahl" Very Happy

And, peachcake, I love your scene Very Happy
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